Rain in my eyes

by Liz   Oct 24, 2005


It's poring with rain,
And you're smiling at me,
The opposite use,
Of pathetic fallacy.
You're hair is dripping,
And so is mine,
You shake your head dry,
And I repeat in time.
My make-up is running,
All down my face,
You look with intent,
As if nothings out of place.
I turn and blush,
And try to be sly,
I think you notice,
As you look in my eyes.
I don't want it to end,
But I'm already wet,
It's time to go home,
This night, I won't forget.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Haven

    Really sweet poem liz, how are you? is your life ok? suppose you know I'm dating ashley?? he is moving here hugs Henriette *who!knows*

  • 18 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    Awww gorjus!!! definate 5/5 !!!
    great work

    sammi xx