My Saviour

by ShadowDancer   Oct 24, 2005


Before you found me
I was alone and lost
you saved me from the cold
that icy winter frost

you protect me from all
you know what to do
you love me for what I am
I feel healed through and through

before you came to me
I was as empty as a shell
But you filled me up
And I want to help you as well

the stars in the sky
those heavenly lights
are nothing compared
to your spirit, so bright

the sun that shines down
and warms my smooth skin
is nothing compared
to the warmth you stirred within

the moon in the night
a bright jewel in the sky
is nothing compared
to the light in your eyes

the clouds that glide by
like balls of cotton, heavenly
are nothing compared
to your softness with me

I love you so much
You filled me right up
You loved me and cared
You lifted me up

I love you

My Saviour

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  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Absolutly beautifull..It flowed amazingly.. im speechless, great work!! I really loved it!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sango

    I love it, I felt the waves, the warmth & all from this poem, i must admit you're an excellent writer, i'll add you to my favorites!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    That's really sweet, and I love how you brought some metaphorical warmth and things into your poem, it was really nice to read. Good job!:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Ruby as far as flow is concerned- you got it just right! Well done... these are the poems I most enjoy reading! 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Hey its me again
    Emma I loved this poem
    I hope Ill feel loved like that one day
    thanx for letting me see some of your great talent
    Emma