Empty

by Ali   Oct 25, 2005


Dissapearing,
like breath upon a window,
fading,
like the colors in a photograph.

Cold,
Like the rain soaked wind,
wilted,
like the flowers form last spring.

blank,
The dusty notebook in my drawer,
silent,
the forgotten piano caked in dust.

Confused,
you pretend to be,
empty,
You make me feel.

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • This is a really cute and sad. i like it. keep it up!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Geoff Clemence

    A very original and creative explanation. SHort and direct. Nice one!

  • 18 years ago

    by goddessofsong

    *tear* that was so beautifully sad ali. i could really see everything you were writing about...