You Lied

by Katie Bennett   Oct 26, 2005


If you really loved me you'd;

Let me take this razor
And bleed my pain away
Let me release the agony
From the hell I've had to pay
let my body eternally rest
And wake up nevermore
Make me realize life just hurts
And it's not worth living for
Let the blood just drip
Do not wipe the tears I cry
Watch the blade as it cuts
Just let me slowly die
Do not clean my wounds
Nor dry my blood at all
If you loved me, you'd stand there
And watch me slowly fall
Listen to the pain I'm in
Just watch my body bleed
Do not try to pull me in
This death is what I need
Listen to the sound my tears make
As they fall onto the ground
Watch my lifeless body
As I slowly start to drown
Instead, I know you never loved me
Like I loved you in vain
because if you did, you'd have kept your promise
"To not cause me any pain"

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  • 15 years ago

    by iFallToPieces

    Awwww this was a great poem, really sad but i loved the flow and could feel what you were going through

    Great Job

  • 17 years ago

    by sobe

    Omg ur a deep writer n das good

  • 17 years ago

    by Moon Princess

    Oh my gosh!! That's really good!! Lol. It's true though, and I'm sure I'm not the only one that feels that way!! Keep going. 5/5.

    P.S thanxs for the comment on my poem :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    This is very well written. Keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow! This was amazing. Truly excellent write.

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