On What Road You Chose To Take....

by Michelle   Oct 26, 2005


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I am worried about my Dad,
I am very depressed.
And, it makes me very sad.

His blood pressure is high,
I cry more and more,
Hoping it will only be a lie.

Only if the doctor could have,
Been more nice,
Knowing I would not laugh,
He knew I didn't need lies.

My father is at-risk of having,
A heart-attack, a stroke, or dying,
There's no more laughing,
And, I am left feeling like crying.

Leaving me bitter and depressed,
I feel guilty for his mistake,
Trying to do my very, very best.
On what road he chose to take.

He chooses to drink,
I am very concerned,
Why didn't he think?
So much, I've learned.

I will never drink,
I can't stand the smell,
It sure does stink.

All I need is more hugs.
Something I don't need,
Will always be drugs.

Dad, you can die,
Any minute,
Don't tell me a lie.

I wish for my Dad,
Happiness and peace,
The only father I ever had.

I wanted you to know,
When it's your time to go,
I will still feel guilty for your mistake,
I will always love you though,
On what road you chose to take.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Riffy

    Hey, this poem was great, the way it was worded was awsome as it got straight to the point.Sorry to hear you're father is an alcoholic.
    xx Riffy xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    It sucks having an alcoholic parent for you its your dad and me my mom! i used to live with her and she only made me a worse person, i had no one to care for me or look after me and my brothers, so i did it all. i had to become an adult at a VERY young age and its not fun at all. hope your dad gets better and you can also talk to me any time you want me email is craziepinkblondie@yahoo.com k
    XOXOXOXO

    ~Ronni

  • 18 years ago

    by HighPerfection

    I like it alot thank u so much for the comments they r really helpful thank u so much ur 1 of my fav definatly keep it up!!

    ;'-(hillary)-';

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachele

    That's really good. I love it. I can relate to that in some way. Like, you want yous dad "back." Like you're tired of him being this certain way, and you just want the "real" him. It's really difficult to live with. You seem so nice. I feel like I can really trust you. Thanks for all the comments. I'd love to keep in touch with you. I sent you a private message. Take care of yourself!

    Love always.

  • 18 years ago

    by Christopher Liau

    Very good. The stanza's are short and to the point. It could use a bit more diverse vocabulary though.

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