I'll Stick Around

by x-Beth-x   Oct 27, 2005


-please vote and message-

Thanx for the advice,
But I don't bealeve I can trust you,
The poison has sunk to deep now,
And I bealeve I've finally lost it,

My dad has finally smoked his final,
And mum's addiction is still here,
But they ruined it all,
My life has finally fell,

But I think I'll stick around for you,
Because your always there,
Through the good times and the bad,
We've always been there for one another,

Him too,
He also helps me along,
There to hold my hand,
There to keep me strong,

Also take to concideration,
My family there ahead,
They too need me,
So I'll stick around for them too,

School is always tough,
With all those fights,
And detention slips,
But I can handle it with them at my side,

At times I feel cold,
At times I feel weak,
But they help me back up,
Standing on the right feet,

So I'll stick with this life,
For now I guess,
But only cuz of you,
Am I sill laying here writing this

-Anarchy-

Plz message me and give advice. Its the first poem I've written that doesn't rhyme much. Thanx...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this one too but as for advice in my opinion i think we should get to know who you are writing this for you say he and you but you never tell us who he or you is which is kinda frustrating cause i dont know if your talking about family or a boyfriend or something like that and i think that like takes away a lot from this poem because it's a good poem but we don't really know what it's actually about its very very vauge 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by boo boo

    Its nice

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