Through the darkness - Part One

by Flying Phoenix   Oct 28, 2005


*Im not a particular fan of poems in more than one part, but this one I think needs it - sorry*

Swirling in the darkness
Cloak held tight by a clasp
Fingers grip gingerly
The wind howls
As it travels across the path

Each step breaks a rhythm
Each breath takes its toll
Dead leaves crushed as it continues
The endless night seeps the soul

His curled up scarf
And twinkling harsh eyes
Proceed down the track
Where no one knows, lies

Sudden sharp screams
Break the doomed land
A sorrowful sigh is uttered
As he travels on
Into the forbidden

Caught by a soft breeze
The clouds show a dazzlingly moon
Dappled light revels a scene
Only in nightmares can
This evil be entombed

Stopped by the light
And awakened by the silence
He turns and mutters
Strange words never heard
Shimmering patterns
Appear on the path before him
Forming a picture
Of the never known land

Turning quickly
His cloak swirls around
And onwards he quests
Without another sound

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fig

    OOOOOOOOOOOOOH!!!!!!! soo visual. that was creepy i could feel chills and everything..ooooooooooooohhh!! second part! SECOND PART!
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    It's certainly interesting. It's unclear what it's truly about, but if you're going for that style then fine. From what ya got, it oculd be a vampire, the devil, a *mysterious and sexy* fallen angel, or a weird rapest who can talk in tongues and make cool things appear on the ground. it might not be finished, but i think it's a great ending, if that makes sense. but then again han, it's your poem, and it'll mean whatever you want it to mean, if it's finished to you, then it's finished for us. if it expresses everything you want it to, then it's perfect. that's all that matters. anyway. after all that, i will just make sure you know me thinks its a fabbo poem anywho! all dark and mysterious and great imagery. keep it up babes. ^_^

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