Distance...

by Karry   Oct 29, 2005


Thought nothing could every change between us
ever since you guys moved ,staying in touch was a must
because ever since we were 1 years old there was a special thing called trust

No matter if we were hyper excited or just not okay
we still spend our holidays together
Easter,new years and our happy birthdays

Now i sit here crying
maybe everything about us still caring about eahcother was just us lieing
life seems so sad and empty
i wish you could be there for me
can yous see the sadness in my eyes?
sometimes it feels like all our beautioful memories fade away with lies

I never realise how distance could keep us apart.
Maybe you shouldnt have moved
Or maybe i shouldnt have counted on you from the start....

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  • 18 years ago

    by joseph

    Well ok you have the concept down just try writing in a more descreptive way like put what you think down and also put it in a different way but for the most part it was good just try what i told you and it should come out way more better

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