Aww, I have felt the same way once or twice in my lifetime (only 16 years) I loved this poem. My favorite lines were
Spinning and shifting from this world to the next,
There's hardly even a moment to stop and look back.

Awesome

~Anthony

Wow....really good one.

Great piece my dear....as always...

Love Ann

Amanda, This is an amazing piece even though it is short, you have managed to capture the emotions and feelings extremely well. It is such a sad piece.

Warmest regards,

Steve

'Tis was short and simple and goes striaght to the point. This poem expressed everything I can't and never will have the courage to say. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

To me,you captured alot of feelings in those few sentences.it was a grrreeaattt!!!!!!!poem.keep 'em comin.
Tes

Nicely done, Amamda!!!

Hey! Wow, that was really well written! I liked it alot! Good job . . . 5/5 for sure! Keep writing . . .

This poem reminds of my father's death, it is a really good poem but short.

With few and simple words you have managed to express a range of deep emotions so effectively well done. I am keen to read more of your work now

Awww!! it's really sad! well done. you have done a great job. sorry for the loss, i've been through it too. Rosie xXx

Nice poem keep it up

Good poem, it was sad

That Was Really Sad Hun *Hugs* But I Enjoyed It! 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Excellent poem. again i say congrats 4 gettin 3rd in my contest...keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
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Amanda ,
For a short piece you have captured so much emotion in this poem ..
A very heartfelt write ...

I love this poem it is sooo good!!
I give it a 5/5