This is a very deep poem, I think a lot of people can relate to it. Including me.

I agree with raven suicide not the way out even tho i often dont ssay that in my poems

;'-(hillary)-';

I like this one...good emotion it makes it seem like the person is calling out for help and doesnt know how to get it. Well u know im here for u and u know my msn! I would check for spelling mistakes again though!
Great work Juls

Very emotional. This was really deep. I'm really sorry if this happened. The flow wasnt that great, but still the overall poem was good. Great Job

Okay.. the emotion and message in this poem were very strong.. but you really need to work on the flow and your spelling.. you cannot just end a line whenever you feel like it because then it is difficult to read.. i would advise that when you are finished writing a poem, to go over it and check for mistakes.. that way, you should not have too many spelling errors..

whn someone yells at me
^ should be "when"

i know i will mot live much longer
^ should be "not"

i grab th knife and pray
^ should be "the"

keep working on your flow and this should be good.. 4/5