Emptiness

by MystiquexOo   Oct 31, 2005


Everything i do isn't good enough
everything i do isn't right
i try my hardest just to please you
and to you its like i didn't even try

i try my hardest every day
i do all that i can do
and every day it just doesn't seem
like I'm good enough for you

i give it all i've got
sometimes even more then that
and what do i have to show for it
nothing. and that`s a fact.

is there something I'm doing wrong
is there anything i can do
because believe me
i would do anything. just for you

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  • 20 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Really deep...full with emotion...and thanks for your comments...and yeah...do you have msn...then we can talk there...what's your name...and how old are you? Tell me k...

  • 20 years ago

    by Tess

    I can relate to this 100% Try to stay strong and eventually things will work out... you will see! ;)