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by RadianceInReverse   Oct 31, 2005


I'm Jealous of the love your given
I'm Jealous of the love your shown
cause I'm constantly among the unknown
beneath the dirt, among the unbound
always on the edge of a breakdown

I'm Hated by the friends you have
I'm Hated by your mom and dad
cause your on the top, with the ones who won't stop
above the dirt with the homebound
forever found among the well known

But you Love me for the pain I have
you Hug me to heal my broken wounds
cause your so caring you don't realize that I'm not like you
always willing to dump your friends just to comfort me
you'd do anything to save me from myself

cause you love my inside
even though I'm continually tortured by my own mind
you comfort me when I shed the tears I cry

You say,"Every-things gonna be just fine, cause I love you and you'll always be mine."

I Love you.......
Cause you don't care that I'm not just like you
I Love you cause your not ashamed to love me
Cause You hold me tight when I'm scared
and you tell me you'll always be here

I'm Jealous of the Love your shown
You Love me even though I'm unknown
I'm Jealous of the life you live
You Love me for the gifts I give!!

This isn't the best poem...but I did my best at giving it the right flow...i would love your corrections/suggestions on how to make it flow better!!!(plz comment)

Thanks Joclyn

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Yeah...it's very nice...has the right flow...very deep...full of emotion...nice one girl...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lenee.Roca

    Hey hunn.
    it was awesome! the only thing i saw was a spelling mistake! (I Love you.......
    Cause you don't care that I'm mot just like you)
    other than that it was perfect!! i think it had the right flow.. i can relate too this kid i really really like and so close to going out with.. he was like yeah my weekend is gonna be busy.. im like yeah mines gonna be empty he goes then lets do something.. i was like okay.. im so excited!! :D
    love lenee

  • 18 years ago

    by Ella

    I did like this poem it was good and you don't need to change it

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hey Hun
    Wonderful poem, i love it, youve reall grown hun, you dont need me anymore!:P keep it up and let you heart guide you

    Love Jenn