My Minds Own Hell

by Fallengod667   Oct 31, 2005


How can i stop,
the pain inside,
my tortured soul
will slowly die.

The tears won't stop,
the pain won't leave
what the hell,
is wrong with me.

What can i do,
against the hate,
In my mind,
my deadly fate.

The horror of,
my early life,
the things inside,
i have to fight.

My past is always,
haunting me,
reminding me,
of my past deeds.

I'm so screwed up,
its hard to tell,
how i will face,
My Minds own hell

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  • 18 years ago

    by Naerwen

    Another wonderful read, well done fine poet. beautiful.

    Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Wow, I am yet again awed by your talent for letting out your emotions through your poetry. You have a gift for it, one many people would do anything to have. Keep writing and best wishes.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Chantelle

    That was ...wow. It was just so fluent and it just came together so well. Every part of it meant something and it made it terrific

    Luv Chan

  • 18 years ago

    by Victoria

    BRILLIANT!!! i LOVE IT!!! THAT WAS REALLY GOOD I LIKE THE FACT THAT IT RHYMES SO WELL AND ALL GOES TOGETHER SO NICELY..GOOD JOB

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