by Becky
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I love it i love it i love it |
by jennifer
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This was a great poem and I know how you feel I was there myself before. The way you wrote this was amazing and the words were excellent 5/5 |
by Stabbylou
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I am honestly speechless, by far that is the best poem you have written and i'm so moved. it's so cleverly written. seriously that is excellent xxx |
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I liiiiiked it hammer. Very cleversome yesum, yes it was. and its true, im glasd u see it as an addiction, cos it is its an illness. welldun luvvy xx |
by Ashley
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Love it, 5/5! good writing skills. |
by xEmmax
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Thanku every1, ur comments mean a lot, keep it up! xxxx |
by Pure Silence
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LOVE IT! keep it up hunny*HUGS* |
by ScarletHaze
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I can relate to this one hun and i guess quite a few others can also. greatly written though 5/5 xox |
by Jo
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Dang, that was good! great job! 5/5 |
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Ohhh i hearts it babe:D |
by xEmmax
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Thanku guys! ur all great :) xxxxx |
by Michelle
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I have been a cutter; since, the age of thirteen. I do not think cutting is an appropriate option to my stress,but at times, I feel so misunderstood. I know what you're going through. I know it may be difficult, you may not have any friends, you may feel hopeless/worthless inside, but really, it's not worth cutting over. I'm trying to stop cutting, but in your poem, you're right, it feels like it's nothing, but an addiction. |
by Pilar
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I'm speechless |
by xEmmax
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Thanku every1, it means so much to me xxxxxx |
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Wow... amazing |
by xEmmax
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Thanku xxx |
by ValerieJg
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I lik this one.. i have a poem about addiction too. 5/5 |
by ANNE
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This couldn't be more true!! I think a lot would agree with you on this! |
by Vicki
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That was deep Em, really well written. xxxxx |
by Ariana
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Wow, awesome piece, the beat of this is flawless which really adds to the poetic side of things. As for the content, I think your descriptions are vivid, they are also quite disturbing but I'm guessing that was intentional. Really nice work overall, 5/5 :) |