The Broken Man

by Fallengod667   Oct 31, 2005


The Broken Man.

Look in my eyes,
And you will see,
All the pain,
Thats inside me.

Look in my heart,
And you will find,
All the things,
I try to hide.

Look in my mind,
And see my thoughts,
See the demons,
That I have fought.

Look at my face,
The shame and scars,
Things in my past,
That have gone wrong.

Look at my posture,
The way I stand,
Look at me,
The broken man.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Naerwen

    This poem is one of my favourites, it conjures so many images from just a few words. a great poem.

    Naerwen The Chosen Bride of White Rabbit

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    Dark and deep. The end is so simple and devastatingly honest. I love it.
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by jennifer

    Wow... This poem is sad but amazing as well, it sent chills through me great job 5/5
    Jennifer