My knight in Shining armor

by Emma   Oct 31, 2005


My knight
was supposed to come ready for a fight
then ride a long journey for me in the moonlight
in the blankness of the night
his armor shown so bright

my knight
was supposed to be you, now i see
my dreams as big as the shining sea
now i know they should have been the size of a pea
i wish someone would still come for me

my true knight
i hope will come
and leave me some
love to become
a princess with her shining knight

please read and comment
thax
Emma

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  • 18 years ago

    by Becky

    Awww this poem made me happy sad and made me giggle lol, well the part about the pea did lol. this poem is soo cute and sweet. i love it, keep up the good work.5/5

    lots of love
    *~*Becky*~*

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, It would be better if you made it longer

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Not bad. it got a bit repeditive with all the sencatnces ending with the same rhme. a lovly idea in genral. some of the words used didnt quite fit (the size of a pea) it cheapens the kind of fantasy feel of this poem.
    nice work though

    Ruby

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