Never ending suicide

by Iyla   Oct 31, 2005


The marks on her arm
show the story's of her life
the never ending pain
thoughts of suicide

second by minute
day by week
month after year
she's grown to weak

sick of trying
to do things right
tired of being alone
crying at night

wishing for someone
to just notice her pain
to just once care about her
instead of calling her names

every second that passes
a part of her dies
the thoughts remain in her head
an illness that wont subside

locked away
deep inside
killing slowly
suicide

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  • 18 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Very good poem kit i love it no wonder Mike liked your work

    Bleeding Demon

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Wow, this is amazing, reminds me so much of myself...I am going through the same...Is this poem about you?? Sorry you are feeling this way, hope you feel better today...Ohh why that rhymed lol I really love this poem, you did an excellent job...

    Much Love Sabrina

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I think it's good...if you still not satisfy with it...try reading it over and over again...you'll get an idea..but to me it's fine the way it is...simple yet meaningful...

  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Great poem, full of emotion, really well written 5/5 xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacob M Parnell

    Good poem 5/5, I really liked it, your on my favorites.
    Check out my new ones

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