Thanks for commenting on my poem, I loved yours. I have the same situation going on too. The way you expressed it is a hell of alot better then what I could ever do. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! : )

Hey this is Really good i like it

Hey that was my friend moddy...but anyways i love this poem soo much u did a really great job on it i cant wait to read more of ur poems.....ur a really GREAT writer...well i hope ill talk to u later...bye jake!!
~Sierra~

5/5 love the new poem....and by the way being a prep isnt something u shoud admit...and u shouldnt think ur better than anyone ese...no offence meant

Oh my gosh thats so sad.... did you really go through that? Must've taken a long time to write because it was put together beautifully, it was very sad, but your choice of wording and whole structure made it flow very well, no one should have to go through that kind of stuff, but it takes the strongest of people to make it through and show that they are strong enough to take hold of the situation and hang in there, most of them just give up way too easily and leave their loved ones, but by staying strong makes you stronger in the long run and makes it easier to get past the hard times you have later on in life, but great job.. I think you did a fantastic job and managed to express alot of emotion in this poem, 5/5

Wow this is awesome jake!!
wow..lol...it's so sad and i think i really feel to it coz it's happened to me to. and i know how much it scars...
I just hope you're ok..
btw..ur comment made me laugh...3 times before u got definately right:P:P lol...thanks for the smil=)
luv...xoxo

Wow...amazing!!!

"I've dealt with my reality.
And mended my sores.
I know the limits of my mentality.
But do you know yours?"

...beautiful!! i'm really sorry this happened. i'm glad you're able to move on. take care and stay strong.
-xXx-

I thought this was ana amazing poem, i really liked the last stanza,

I've dealt with my reality.
And mended my sores.
I know the limits of my mentality.
But do you know yours?

i thought tht las bit woz really emotional n really thought provoking because you could substitute the situation which led to this poem for almost anyones, which is a hard thing to create.

good work. keep goin.

xXx

Hey well i just wanted to say that i love they way u expressed ur feelings! well keep writing and the good work! :)

Thats a really good poem! and im sorry about your dad.. =( but i gave you a 5/5
have a great day!
-Rachel

Its really good! I gave you a 5. Never been thru it hope I nv will. sorry that it happened

I'm sorry... did this really happen? i'm just glad that you're opening up your feelings on poetry. if you want a shoulder to lean on, i'll be there! this is one of the most sad poems i've ever read. please keep writing! 10/5 ;D
-sonia

Wow, this poem is very powerfull and full of emotion, i went thru this with my step dad for 9 yrs from the age of 5, but he will pay 4 wat he did someday, and i hope your dad duz 2 no child ever desrves to go thru this!!, u put alot of work into this, i can tell by the use of words, its very well written... keep up the work hun, xoxoxx

I thought it was a really good poem filled with a lot of emotion and your truths. And I hope you don't mind, but I added you to my favorites list. I know I don't really understand what you felt when you wrote this, but I did feel something inspiring me to write another poem. So I want to say thanks. -Natosha B.

Never had to face abuse as a child, but i am so sorry that you did. that breaks my heart. the poem was really good. touching. this one made me cry too. if all ur poems make me cry i'm going to quit reading them. lol. j/k. good job. 5/5 again

This poem is sad, but fantastic wrk keep writing and take care hun sarah x

Woh! This poem really touched me! I felt all the emotions and I felt like crying. It was really emotional. Well n.e. ways it was an excellent poem one of the best yet! Keep it up! ^_^

Wow, intense topic and intense writing. i liked the rhyming and the flow of it. the last stanza was amazing. it totally pulled the poem together. good work.

I know it takes a lot to be brutally honest about such disturbing memories. And to put them into words is even harder. I can definately relate to this, And I think you've done an amazing job. Congrats on being strong dear

I realy liked it i hope u enjoy my poem as i enjoyed them...