My Storm

by Bug1219   Nov 1, 2005


My storm is inside of me
like a hurricane that gets bigger
everyday that i am here.
i argue about whether to live or just go ahead and die.
my storm is all around me
like tornado's dancing on my heart
i want you to talk to me again,
but you never do,
what did i do to deserve this pain from you?
my storm is you.
you come in my heart
like a land slide
riping and tearing up my heart and soul.
you are my storm.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    I love this poem! you did an amazing job with showing your emotions the ending was great 5/5 <33

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    I liked the ending
    still the emotional side is lacking a bit but nice write

  • 16 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wonderful job. the flow was good and your emotions were strong.. keep it up :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessica

    Aww.. this was good.. i loved the descriptions and wording you used.. it really added flavor to the poem.. the only thing is the flow.. it didn't work very well.. nice try though..

    riping and tearing up my heart and soul.
    ^ should be "ripping"

    nice job, keep up the good work.. just try and work on your flow.. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    I love this poem.

    "you are my storm."

    I think that is cool how you refer to it as a storm, new way to put it. :)

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