Hey. that makes total sense. i totally get it. great job.

kelsey
xoxoxo

What can I say but wow! Way to let out the turmoil inside!

Wow! other great one..i like the words u used to make it totally understandable!! Great job again hun
Juls

Great poem. really good

I hope you have a hobby 4/5

This was done beautifully..so much emotion..

Hey i love this one! u are so awesome! luv ya,

shanna21

Wow! Great job. It was short but had a lot of emotion. This was really good! 5/5

I love this poem.

"you are my storm."

I think that is cool how you refer to it as a storm, new way to put it. :)

Aww.. this was good.. i loved the descriptions and wording you used.. it really added flavor to the poem.. the only thing is the flow.. it didn't work very well.. nice try though..

riping and tearing up my heart and soul.
^ should be "ripping"

nice job, keep up the good work.. just try and work on your flow.. 5/5

Wonderful job. the flow was good and your emotions were strong.. keep it up :D

I liked the ending
still the emotional side is lacking a bit but nice write

I love this poem! you did an amazing job with showing your emotions the ending was great 5/5 <33