Cant Tell

by Death Shall Free Us   Nov 1, 2005


The Pleasure is deep
But the pain is deeper
You Know what your doing
But you cannot help yourself
You want help
But you have no help
Just those within
But they do not help
They just help hurt
They dont care
Until they find out
Thats why they cant find out
Thats why they wont find out

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  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Wow short but meaningful at least to me it is xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    I absolutely love this poem. It's amazing 5/5 none to less. take care xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*beautiful*~||||d!$a$teR||||

    Finished writing the poem of my father. if u have time.

  • 18 years ago

    by FlowerThatDied

    Not sure about this i think u shud mayb hav some rhymes and less frequent words but other than that its good.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*beautiful*~||||d!$a$teR||||

    Wow. really good. keep writing. maybe longer ones. 5/5.

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