Awesome poem!!!

"I'm tired of adding pages,
To my big book of regret,
And your not even helping,
Half the book is you, I'll bet"

i love that stanza. keep it up!
-xXx-

My, I can tell pretty clearly that you have improved greatly since you joined this site.

I have nothing to complain about in this poem, it's perfect the way it is and I absolutely heart the topic!

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Strong and powerful. Excellent write.

Anthony,

Many of us have a big book of regrets, but we learn to turn the page and start afresh.

No use looking back as you can't change it, but tomorrow is yours and you can shape your destiny.

Well written.

Regards,

Steve

That is really good!!! I know how u feel man...

Thats a very well worded poem, i loved it. It hit a nerve i'll say.
Keep it up

Interseting poem
i loved how you came up with a new and unique way to write on such a common subject
well done

Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing. :o)

((((Big Hugs)))))

Michelle

Anthony....
This was an incredibly strong meaningful poem ...
This write really deserves the honor to shine in this weeks top rated recent poems..Awesome my friend ...

Wow...That was an excellent poem...I loved the idea and everything that came with it. Keep it up. xxx

Hello huni, i totally love this poem, i think u r a really great writter, i can really relate to how you are feeling, but please dont dwell on your past, people make mistakes, the only way we learn is when we make mistakes and if i hadn't of made the mistakes or had the things that have happened to me then i wouldn't b hoo i am today... i would be really happy if u could open up 2 me and tell what your life is about and why you feel so hurt, i hope that u find happiness and im always here if u need someone to talk to

keep shining coz u r very talented

luv Maddy xxx

The plot and idea was awesome. it takes a tru visionary to think of something besides " i hate you, its ur fault" and rlly express it in such emotion. nice flow. definately 5/5

That's a great poem... and it's sad to say that I have done a lot of things I now regret... simply one person.. but any ways great job.

I loved it! Fabulous! "Half of it is you..." Yay! You rock!

Loved it, just perfect! xx

Hey this poem lft me speechless you have so much talent and seem wise beyond your years...you truely amaze me xxx

I freaking LOVE THIS POEM.. BESt freaking EVER!! OMG.. dont mind that i am swearing.. but i love it sooo much *tear tear*

O this is hot i wish i could write like that

Wow... it's sad, but vry nicely written. I'm sorry if it's from true expoeriance... but it's a great poem... keep writing, 5/5.

Oh WoW u can rhyme pretty well =)