Who are you kidding...pretty bad? I say it's totally awesome...girl...you are good...most of us can relate to this...we all feel like we are dead...but we are not...we just have to get on with this life..no matter how tough it will be...just like what angel of your darkness said...it takes a strong person to live...so...be strong hun...I'm always her for you...

Far out this was so sad, i have run out of words to describe your talent, and how your writing makes me feel..it is honestly amazing, but also sad that youre going through this..i truely hope that things arent still like this..keep staying strong youre an inspiration to everyone on this site..especially to me at this point in my life..take care xxx

Argh, you are so down on yourself >=| ... xx your poems are all amazing and especially this one. nothing of what you write is "bad" or whatever else you suggest it is. it has meaning to you... and you write it for us to read, and then we understand how your feeling... and your so good at it. hahaha do i even know what im talking about??? well i hope you understand...im pretty tired just quietly... anyway. great poem. like the others xx

Life is like an orange, rough and bitter on the in the beginning, To reach the sweet and juicy part, we have to take time and peel of the outside.
The first years of life are hard, and we often think it's not gonna be worth living, but later on, we will get to the bether part, aslong as we hang on.

Tim

Aww don't say this is bad...dont be like me lol, i think this is great i lovvvvved the ending it was such a great way to end this poem

I can't recognise this person,
Too fake for me too see.
That their life was that messed up,
Is this how it's meant to be?

that was my favorite part though, nice poem tho 5/5

Wow this is amazing my dear, I loved the last verse it almost made me cry aww, you have such a special gift

Omg i loved this poem
keep up the dood work!!

I totally loved this poem, god u r such a great writer!!! i love it!!!! the poem my life of total unhappiness was on my other account and i was 'Maddison'

anyways take care hun, im here 4 u if u need me!!

Everyone of us that have read your poem can seriously relate... you are blessed with a gift for writing... never let that go... cuz when it comes down to it... like me, writing is all i have... so dont let it go!!!
~Much Love~
Kassandra

I loved it, I can feel what you were feeling when you wrote it, great job :) BloodRedRose

Oh i meant to say keep up the good work lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh i meant to say keep up the good work lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh i meant to say keep up the good work lol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was the most saddest poem that i have ever read. and i think that u r very talented. keep up the poems.

I liked this poem. it was so good. keep it up! 5/5 plz read mine and comment it to plz