My Surrender

Powerful. As always. 5/5

RLS

Not bad, i liked
I'm done with being what I am,
I've had more than I can take,
I will have no redemption,
What difference will it make?
but some of your rhymes where really simple. Other than that. 5/5

I have read this poem several times, and yet haven't commented. I keep coming back to the last lines: "For once I've been accepted,
I've been chosen by the dark." they are very powerful and resonate deeply with emotion.
*VioletRaven*

Thats great. ALL YOUR POEMS ARE GREAT DAMNIT!!! lol, I wish I could write like you. Or alot of people too. But you have your own little way of unique writing. I love it. If I had a big vocabulary, I'm sure my poems would be better. But 5/5, its awsome. I loved it!

I dont think i fully understood that poem at first so obviously i have read it again thrice times
i know the feeling and Im there for you if you need to talk please dont feel this way on your own
let me in and i can help
i love YOU
so you are accepted your accepted with me thats if youll have me. . .
I loved it