PEOPLE UR SUPPOSE 2 COMMENT THIS IS GOOD YOU KNOW.. Atleast im commentin =D anywayz Rik this is once again another good poem love it and cant wait to read another one of your poems

XxX Corinne XxX

Awww its really sad but deffinatley a work of art..keep it up rik!!
lots of love xoxox

5/5 really great and touching poem. Sad, but really sweet the way you felt. Great job and keep it up. ^_^

:D! i love it. :D. 5/5 it's great.
*waves*
-Ying

Hey its good i give it a 5++

Rik i know i am the least person you want to alk to now because of the fight but i loved this poem and still do rik i hope u will never stop wrighting poems no matter what ppl say. rik i love you and ur poems with all my heart and i just hope our friendship will be ok in the end i really love ur poem rik. hope ur ok.
love you lots
~jenny~
(crying. unloved. and un wanted)

Hey thats a great poem i love it

Its an excellent poem Rik- keep it up ;)

Much love and God bless,
FalLEn*-

Hey rik...i think this poem is facinating!! it goes real deep and its sooo moving!! sad but beautiful! keep it up!:)
xxx

Wow, Rik, the imagery is great! Your description was beautiful! It's very sad, though, but really good! Keep up the great work, Rik! My favorite part is:

"You might be gone in the world but in my heart you're still mine"

anway, Keep writing!

~BJ~

Great poem...ur write its ur besty poem..lol gr8 work
xxx
peekaboo

Hey ya Rik i am so lyk speechless...u reli have talent...i reli wish i cud rite lyk ya...
wana trade brains lol...jks
keep it up tc mwa luv dia xoxo