A goodbye(part two)

by Switchblade89   Nov 4, 2005


(Please read part one before you read this one)

"This is me just wanting to say hey,
even though I did when we were in the hallway,
hopefully though, next time you will speak,
but just so you know, when you came up to me,
my whole body got numb and weak,
and any guy who can do this will make me happy,
which is why I ask for this request,
please will you meet me at the park,
and I know exactly what time is best,
why don't you meet me after dark,
look for me, I'll be wearing white,
k bye,
P.S. hope to see you tonight"

when I read this, I didn't know what to do,
I knew something like this was too good to be true,
but i was in no position to pass up meeting someone who,
seems to like me the way that I would like to,

So I went through school, with a smile so bright,
knowing that tonight, I was going to be with my love and first sight,
so when I went home I had three things on my mind,
you beauty, the cologne to wear, and the clothes I had to find,

When I found the cologne and the clothes it was already getting dark,
I hurried out of the house, and started walking to the park,
as I was walking I picked some flowers from the floor,
and I even stopped to buy chocolate at a candy store,

I walked into the park right as the moon came out,
when thirty minutes went by I started to have doubts,
and just when I was about to give up on this night,
in the distance there was a figure, and it was wearing white......

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  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    Awesome again!! ~did u notice that i say aweasome a lot?~ i cant wait to go and read pt. 3!! i love ur poems!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by JAY Poet

    Great poem i understand you keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie Bennett

    Anticipation.....lol, cant wait for th enext part, I know it'll be pwerful though! Few thoughs though....you might want to re-read this poem and fix some of your spelling mistakes. And thanks for teaching me how to spell "tragic", lol. Nevertheless, great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by xmauix

    You need to make a part three even though matt already told me some of it, i still wanna know what happens

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    There's a part 3?!?! I WANNA SEE IT!!
    sory..really enthralled in this story...wana know wat happens:P
    u're an awesome poet..xoxo