Whisper, My Flame

by KitchBlood   Nov 5, 2005


Whisper in my ear,
the callings of the wind,
catch me as I fall,
like an autumn leaf.

Whisper in my ear,
the tides of the ocean
save me as I drown,
like a bleached seashell.

Whisper in my ear,
the moving of the earth,
find me as I wander,
through these lost woods.

Whisper in my ear,
the crackling of the fire,
warm me, let me burn,
in the living flame.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    Whisper in my ear,
    the callings of the wind,
    catch me as I fall,
    like the leaves that spin

    Whisper in my ear,
    the tides of the ocean
    save me as I drown,
    choking in slow motion.

    Whisper in my ear,
    the movment of the earth,
    find me as I wander,
    under this mezmorizing curse.

    Whisper in my ear,
    the sound of crackling fire,
    warm me, let me burn,
    forfill my desires.

    i have no idea, i think it's good just how it is but like make sure it rhymes maybe? i think that would make it better i dunno i like it great job! keep writing :)
    always here~
    -Kit

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