5/5 It is a really nice poem. I like it lots. 5/5 thanks for sharing and always take care.

Yay....finally, I'm the first one to comment.

Excellent!!!! wow... truly amazing. keep it up!
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Wow, really well written.
I like the idea behind it alot, its very good.
Once again you've used a great choice of words, and written a very effective poem !!
5/5

xxx cici xxx

I thought the topic I chose for you was a bit cliche, but somehow you manage to prove me wrong with your brilliant way of writing, now I must hurry and write the topic you chose for me, I don't want to disappoint you now. =)

The poem itself was wonderful, each stanza has a message of it's own, I didn't expect less from you.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Wonderfully penned, another superlative and superb write Hans, just splendid, bravo!!!

Beautifully penned and you nailed it, my friend....Love Ann

I love the idea behind this poem. and your style of writting made sure that although this topic has been used many times before this poem still has a very indervidual feel about it.

Bringing back a sweet smile in my way.
i think you should change that slightly, the 'in my way' clashes.
very nice, and true. Growing up is a phenomina(sp?) all its own, and it's a one time thing. 5/5

This is sssssssooooooooo good
gosh it is alittle how i feel
like you said somethings that i could never

Very well written.
You write well and your words always seem to mean something.
Your work always amazes me and this poem is no execption....
5/5

xxx cici xxx

Where are you?
when you gonna write some more....extraño tu poesia. :-(