Graceful Struggles

by Jacklyn   Nov 6, 2005


She falls
Leaving her grace,
while venting angers
sorting her troubles
craving forgiveness

She falls
Opening her wounds
all emotional
her simple way to deal
to skate them away

She falls
On the hard ice
drenched with sweat
refusing to give in
proving resistance.

She falls
More vulnerable than before
pain builds up slow
as she skates hours more
Realizing she's not as strong

She gets up
Learning to forgive
to heal and move on
Learning she's not alone
She skates with grace again.

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  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    "She gets up
    Learning to forgive
    to heal and move on
    Learning she's not alone
    She skates with grace again"

    filled with grace, absolutely beautiful! we fall down, we get back up...life goes on.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    A hard topic and you nailed it gracefully....great job....

    Love Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    To be strong and stand up even though it may be hard.
    Concept grasped - Well inside my own head anyway.

    I'm off on study leave for a week or two; final exams and all.
    I'll hopefully get back to writing abit more after school's finally over.
    Take care girl and i'll catch up on the commenting if i miss some .

    Love yoo millions +30.
    xx
    Kalah.

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This is unbelievable!!! It shows hard work and dedication will help you achieve your dreams! A wonderfully uplifting piece! Well done~Holly

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