My perfect dream ©

by LostInLife!   Dec 12, 2003


My Perfect Dream!

I dreamt of you again last night,
You seemed so happy, jolly and bright,
Just as you always do,
Your face i saw so clearly, your pretty little face,
Your voice i heard so loudly, your sweet and tender voice.

In my dreams the perfect world is here,
But in reality it's no were near,
In my dreams you are mine and i am happy,
In reality i dont want to hear " your time will come for love"
Coz i feel its already hear,
With you and only you

You are my fondest memory that will never be erased.

I dreamt of you again last night,
You held my hand, it felt so right,
Then you cuddled me, you took my breath,
And started a pounding in my chest.

I want it all, i may sound greedy,
But i'm not really i'm just needy,
I'd like to have that feeling, in reality not in my dreams,
so that's how i want love to feel

plz read, rate and comment i'd be very greatful !!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    great poem. i can relate to this poem. keep up the good work

    Ashley

  • 20 years ago

    by Tony Alexander

    I can relate to the dreams. I used to love to fall asleep just so that I wouldn't have to deal with reality for a little while and I could see someone whom I was missing. I thought that the poem could've been a lttle better though. That will come with more time and experience though.

  • 20 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    Dreams like those are the best. The only thing is that I cant stand waking up and knowing that it all didnt happen and wont...:( so sad, but keep up the good work.

  • 20 years ago

    by KeEzY

    ALMOST ALL THE POEMS YOU WRITE I CAN RELATE TO!!!!!!!!EVERY NIGHT I HAVE ADREAM ABOUT THIS BOY I REALLY LIKE AND I WISH THEY COULD COME TRUE

  • 20 years ago

    by ashley b

    Jemma~
    I think I liked this poem the best! You are a good poet. I immediatly knew how you felt after reading this! good job!
    ashley b