All on her own

by amy   Nov 7, 2005


Don't you worry mama, dad's not gone for long,please don't cry oh mama dear, for u did nothing wrong,mommy please don't leave me here,ur point u've surley shown ,mama i ambegging u, don't leave me here all on my own

the sun is going down, i don't know where u r,my heart is in deep worry for i think u've gone to far,the shaddows have grown thicker, im scared,curled up by the phone,im slowly dieing mama for u've left me on my own

i was only a gurl,and a little one at that
cold dead and a afraid laid out across the mat,the fear of never seeing dad
and yes it was ur fault,for leaving me,alone to die draining my eyes of all their salts

oh yes , oh yes,o mommy dear
i think u should have known
to never leave me here at night, and never on my own

(this poem is rilly important to me, ) can soeone please VOTE!

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  • 18 years ago

    by SiCK N TWiSTED

    Omg is dis poem tru?!!! its good

  • 18 years ago

    by daisy

    Yes I understand your sitution. Well now ny cousin is doing very well since wat has happen to her. I wish you well. I have a nine page poem about my life it would be coming soon on this website. But as life goes on my poem about my life goes on. Everythin in my poem is tru everthing. But it would be on there sometime this week.Part one through 4. Thanx For commenting on my poems I really appreciate it.

  • 18 years ago

    by amy

    Hi everyone,
    for anyone who has read my poem, it is a reflection of my child hood, and what WOULD have come of me... if i hadn't of moved in with my aunt. i dedicate this to my mother, who left me alon for all of those cold nights, and also to my loving aunt who took me in to her loving arms.. please rate this poem and let me know of any changes i can make to im prove the flow of it. i would b very greatful to any good comments and ratings, thanks guys!

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