Uncertainty

by CinnamonTwirl   Nov 8, 2005


She's not sure that he knows
Just how he makes her smile
Past pains just to arrive at this
Has made it all worth while

She's not sure that he knows
That he runs rampant through her thoughts
And he's got her unconditionally
Not needing to be bought

She's not sure that he knows
How on him, she relies
And through all he'll forever be
Gorgeous in her eyes

She's not sure that he knows
That she's amazed by all he does
He damn near takes her breath away
It feels somethin like love

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I definately wrote this poem in like....september, but I just got around to finding it and posting it. I wrote for this amazin boy I found, and I guess there ain\'t much else to it. Please comment and vote, it means a lil more to me than the other. Thankx! lol.

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  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    Hey the poem was really good.. it was sweet and it showed alot of emotion. emotion as you know is the life of a poem.. flowed well and would be great to read to your special boy.. nicely done..
    I also wanted to say thanks because you commented on one of my poems a while back and you actually gave an honest answer.. which really means alot to me.. so i just wanted to say thanks!!
    Byebye EJ

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 gr8 gr8 poem...n i like that u told us a bit about wats it was made 4 n all that...thnx 4 replyin 2 my post...i appreciate it! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    She's not sure that he knows
    How on him, she relies
    And through all he'll forever be
    Gorgeous in her eyes

    that was the best part i think

    i love your vocab, and i love the way you don't rhyme words like be and me all the time im so jealous lol but im so glad i got to read your stuff cause your most definatly going on my favorites list. i love how i've only read two poems and you've already got like a big range in poem topics i can't do that...your soooo good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydia O

    This is a poem that evokes all the joy and enthusiasm of a new love. It's very refreshing and a pleasure to read.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a great poem i liked it a lot :-)

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