When I Was Driving

by Italian Stallion   Nov 9, 2005


When I was driving
all I could think of was me and you
and the times that we felt like we had flew
are the times that I can not lose

When I was driving
I asked myself, why you and I
why did our baby have to die
I am sitting here driving
and all I can do is sigh

As we lie
our baby in that tiny casket
and as the last candle was lite
a tear came crawling down from my eye

As I was driving
all I could think of was my baby Lou
as I sit upon the wheel
all I could hear was a squeal
my life has ended

~This poem Is not true. I just started to write and this is what I wrote. Please comment and tell me what you think. Thank you~

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  • 18 years ago

    by paddy

    Wow joe,
    powerful stuff
    you have a good imagination
    great stuff
    4 out of 5
    cant wait to read more
    love me
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by beautiful-angel

    That poem is very good