17 cuts is all i need

by Tiffany Vorce   Nov 10, 2005


17 cuts is all i need,
dont be scared when I bleed.

one for all the hate you bring,two for all and everything,

three for every tear I shed,
four for my heart filled with dread,

five for every lie you told,
six for when you broke my soul,

seven for when you tore my heart,
eight for when I fell apart,

nine for when you destroyed my Eden,
ten for when you stole my freedom,

eleven for this dull, aching pain,
Tweleve for this insanity running through my veins,

thirteen for each bit of happiness you take, fourteen for all the pain you make,

fifteen for the broken pieces of me you left,

sixteen for each and every breath,
One more cut to seal my Death...

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  • 17 years ago

    by pain is me

    That was the most wonderful thing ive ever read
    very tragic, beautiful
    like nothing else
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Original..i liked it well done.
    The rythms worked well and didn't sound force, good vocab.
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by *mishelle*

    Very good poem, well written, 5/5