Life

by Amberinaa   Nov 10, 2005


My world was dark
and filled with hate
My heart was cold
this was my fate

to die alone
to die so sad
to remember memories
and the life I had

My cheeks were wet
I'd cry alone
my heart would
crumbled like a stone

I was giving up
the pain was real
it hurt so bad
it was all I could feel

I wanted out
of this thing called life
so I went for it
I grabbed the knife

My wrists went numb
the blood would flow
Silently crying
I was dying so slow

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really good, but kinda dropped off quickly, i would have liked to see maybe another stanza but it was still really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    I don't see why it hasn't been commented on yet! it's great, sad, but great. The alone feeling and desertedness is such a strong emotion and i love poems with such strong feelings of emotion =) good job.

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