My one regret

by snowboots firefighter   Nov 10, 2005


My one regret i can never forget.
I feel like i made a bet,that put me in a unpayable debt.
The thought of what i did makes me sweat.

I took a life, and the memory cuts me like a knife.
Tommy I am sorry that you never will have a wife.

I was your Friend, and I put your life to a end.
I hear your voice in the wind, from every curve and bend.

You and i were like brothers.
We were always there for each other.
Always had a cover for one another.
I cried when i told your mother.

Maybe it was your pain,that drove you insane.
Back when we were younger we would sit by the windowpane,and watch the rain.
You had nothing to gain with that gun!So you died invane!
Taking your life left a permanent stain!

you tried to do me in! You knew you could not win!
You threw away your life and it landed in the bin!
The taking of life does not make boys men!
It stains their souls with sin!
It is something I never want to do ever again!

My one regret I will never forget.

This is about the tommy in my profile! PLEASE COMMENT ON THIS! I NEED FEEDBACK! >_< PLEASE......

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  • 17 years ago

    by the simple girl

    Wow, I almost cried... that is a really powerful poem aka story. I'm sorry you had to go through that in your life, It can be tough sometimes... Keep up your poetry, it is strong and it brings a very good point to the table.
    ---Ashley

  • 17 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    Man dis is deep i like it if it really happened well im sry ive lost some real good friends to suicide broke my heart. but dont end up doin stupid shit lik i tried live everyday like its ur last. keep it up man. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Zaine

    But tommy wasnt a good person. you and him were friends at one point? he almost raped that girl. and he woulda killed your girlfriend if you didn't stop him. you saved 2 lives for the price of one. and that one life being gone might of saved lives in the future. you have done more to help then what you think. but you still hurt because of it. it hurts knowing you did that, just don't look at it much. keep walking in school, don't look down. just keep livin ya know?