MaKiNg ThInGs RiGhT!!

by UnWaNtEd   Nov 10, 2005


Her eyes are red from all her tears,
the pain and torture of many years.
Why is life always so bad,
does the world love seeing her sad?
She asks for forgiveness of her sins,
but still the pain remains within.
All the lies came out in the end,
I thought you were my true best friend!
I told you everything about my life,
But know you make me contemplate the knife!
Why may i ask, do you cause me pain,
your making me go insane!
Leave me alone, because tonight,
In my own way, i will make things right!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pieper

    Good job....this was an awesome poem....u are really good at writing poems!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Wonderfull....ive never beeen able to express how i feel in short poems...smth qhich u hav doen wonderfully...
    dhaval

  • 18 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
    ~Sammy