Night

Short yet it's enough to express what you've wanted. Great choice of words used to describe what is intended.

'As the stars laugh,
The moon is mocking'
I really like these lines, it's different and unique.

I personally prefer night to day, and this poem capture my interest. Your dislike is well portray here. I like it! =D

Short it may be..it was very fun to read...I loved it Liz....I finally tried to write a poem about nature..check them out if u get a chance..they are called (Black Rose, White Dove) and (Wind Swept Sea)...thanks Joclyn