Sweet Tears

by ThugPoet   Nov 11, 2005


Its hard to explain the way that they taste,
as a pain never replaced triggers a sensitive drop to trickle down my face,
for the longest moment I'm overwhelmed, powerless & over come,
until a single tear climbs down these haunted lips to the tip of my tongue,
& it reminds me of You, Your smile, Your eyes,
Your warmth when I held You, a Love uncontrollable & undenied,
I can taste the happiness that was You, I can taste Your lips,
its saturated me from the depths of my soul right up to my finger tips,
Baby I've begged for You & bled for You, but now I've accepted defeat,
because before tonight, Jaan, my tears have never tasted so sweet.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Sora

    A beautiful write! Very deep, filled with mixed emotions. I enjoyed reading this poem. The best poem I've read so far today. Your words touched me, they were creative and sweet. I, for some reason love poems about rain and tears. And the title of this poem caught my eye and I had to read. Job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    This is a lovely dedictaion. You have a beautiful way of expressing yourself....that is one lucky lady.
    I wuld luv to hear wat u think bout one of ma poems. 5/5 Great write!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Free Spirit

    Very nice, I've wanted to use jaan in my poems when I came to a point where I wanted to write Shiree, I was in sucha mess...anyways holla back 1

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Beautiful, loving and heartfelt.....

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Beautiful poem. So very touching and meaningful. I loved this. I have one called tears too. if u want, check it out. Anyways great job:)

    Ana*

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