by lacey Nov 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Some of this poem is true and some is not so if you could please commit on it |
Well i loved it....it kinda scares me though bc the guy i care about is leaving this summer...we're not together but i still cannot bear the thought of seeing him leave...i wanna be with him so bad...neways nice poem |
by lacey
I DIDNT REALLY WANT IT TO FLOW THAT MUCH BUT THANKS |
by DeepSoul
It was pretty good. I don't know... it didn't really flow really well, but you did a good job with emotion. i give you 3/5 :) |