I'm sure breakups are tough. Everytime something goes wrong in my life (which is quite often) sure i'm upset, but i know i'll learn from it. That keeps my spirits high. And the break up may be for the best, b/c you might meet another girl even better for you. Try your best not to be too sad over this, things have a twisted way of working out in the end. Goodluck

>BRIT

This is soo sweet, finally a guy with feelings. Hope it works out for you!!! and remember not all girls are like taht!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO
~~Sweetie

I can tell from your poem you have a great heart and a curious mind. Where there is faith, there is hope
I can see love is alredy there

This is a tough time for you i can tell. breakups suck massively! i always hear that its love when it hurts. maybe this is for the better, maybe its for the worse. no one really knows. life is unpredictable. if she's really the one for you, perhaps you should ask her why she wanted and did break up with you, maybe then you could sort things out and you may happen to try to make things better. i cant necessarily garuntee that it'll all work out, but there is a possibility. things in life screws up. sometimes it gets better, only if you try
thanx for commenting on my poem, i know my advice isnt the best, but its the least i could do for you.
DDGB
~harley~

Good words to realese your woes. I'm not sure what my favorite stanza was, but i think it may have been the third one. I know how you feel, i went through the same thing with my girl. A week after breaking up we got back together but it wasn't the same, and two weeks after that, we finished. in my opinion its better to just move on. relationships finish for a reason, so don't try to recapture what was once there.

Brad

P.S. life is too short, don't spend it being upset over the little things. you'll find someone better one day

Yes. thank you for the advise. but this girl is infact amazing. i cant help but try.

I give it a 5/5 because I really like the poem, I dont acutally think about just love when I read it though... Friendship also lol which is still love=)
Girls... r annoying! (I am one) Don't let a girl in anyway ruin ur life, Especially when ur only 16 (Yes I know so am I) it's not worth it. Anyways great poem=D

Awww thats so sad. Brought a tear to my eye. You are a truly amazing writer, you have talent.

I jus broke up with my bf (we've been goin out over a year) and its not cuz we dont like each other...its cuz i'm moving away...so its really hard to know that we still really love each other. so...i know wot ur goin through, and it is hard, but i learned that i had to move on......maybe thats wot u need to do..?? its jus a suggestion, but i kno it worked for me. idk...good luck with everything anyway jesx

David, I wanted to read more of your poems, because your really good at writing.. so i read this one. Oh my, you made me shed a few tears. That was amazing work. I have felt this way before too. Man, we share the same emotions. Crazy.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

Thanks for your support. and good words.

Great poem, really good, but you have so many sad poems, but put some love in ya written man, lol, good job though, ttyl sometimes PeAcE 5/5

Thank you hunky.

I have felt like u before...not a long time ago...like 2-3 weeks ago...i have to say that i was head over heels in love with him and he was just like ur ex is with u...like he didn't care and he would break up with me out of nowhere and then he would call me back and be like "oooh...i'm sorry i don't know what i was thinkin"...and i never tought that I would be the one to say this ... but love is blind...and it can get to u...and u just have to be ur strongest when u feel your weekest...i don't know if that makes sense...but i just have to be there 4 u...i don't know...we have so much in common its not even funny...great poem by the way...5/5

Aaaaaw thats so sad. Now I feel sorry for you and awful because I did that to somebody. But its all better between us now, I hope it works out for you.

The whas good until you got to the end and that last line made it entire poem amazing. The last line was simply brilliant!!! BRAVO
And I feel for oyu and your situation
But you already have enough ppl trying to givbe you advice so I'll just keep mine to myself unless oyu'd really like to hear it

Much Luv -VICKIE-

Hey, this was very well written but it was so sad.
much love and happiness,
marjan

I really, truly like it!! I can totally relate. But I don't hate my friend. It's just that she has forgotten me because of her new friends.. I hope she'll realize our friendship! Nice poem!! Really touching!