One Cut...Too Deep

by heavenly demonic   Nov 15, 2005


She looks into the mirror
At her pale white face,
Stained black eyes
And tears of disgrace.

Her heart is broken
Her souls turned black,
And self esteem
She seems to lack.

Shes not pretending
The pains not fake,
She picks up the blade
Her hands start to shake.

She takes her last glance
And draws her last breath,
Shes just a waste of space
Her whole life is a mess.

She lifts up her wrist
As the blade presses down,
One cut..too deep...
She hits the ground

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  • Hey amzing poem, great rhyming and flow, i really wish i could give you somthing ver a five, but i can't. :(
    Well done!
    Love Mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Andi

    Thx 4 the comment....this is really good and sad!!! u capture the emotions of cutter well!!! great rhyme scheme and keep up the good work.
    andi

  • 18 years ago

    by Stephanie

    You are an amazing writer...I loved this poem...keep up the great work...

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

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