If I ended it all tonight....

by Jacob M Parnell   Nov 16, 2005


If I ended it all tonight.
Would anyone really care?
If death I would invite.
Who would be there?
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Would anyone cry?
Would it be hard for some?
Who would say goodbye?
Who would be numb?
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Will people remember the good?
Or dwell on the bad?
I was misunderstood.
I hated my dad.
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Will people question why I did it?
Or will it finally be clear?
The reason I quit.
Was because I couldnt take another year.
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If I ended it all..
Would the pain finally go away?
Could I finally stand tall?
Would I finally be ok?
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If I did end it?
Who would do the prayer?
Would anyone admit.
That they were unaware.
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If I did make it right.
Will the pain finally subdue?
If I ended it all tonight.
It would be because of you....

(c) JP 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Omg..i could relate to this 110%...
    wow..awesome poem but to answer your questions..god yeh ppl would miss u and ppl care..
    i hope you're ok..talk to me weneva u want xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by ...~WinglessAngel~...

    I thought this peom was really good, I could completely relate to it and i really touched me. Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by ...~WinglessAngel~...

    I thought this peom was really good, I could completely relate to it and i really touched me. Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This poem is very good. i've asked myself many of these questions in the past.

    the last line though doesn't seem to fit...maybe you wanted it to stand out, not really sure.

    all in all great poem .

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