I had only a moment....

by Switchblade89   Nov 16, 2005


This is my first time writing for someone whose new to me....
but I'm going to write a poem that I hope will make you happy,
so....here goes....

I had only a moment, to see your beautiful face,
beauty that emits such a warm embrace,
and as the moment passed, I noticed something different,
your beauty was so simple, elegant, and innocent,

I had only a moment, to hear your voice that was so sweet,
I lost words to speak, my heart had met defeat,
being speechless doesn't come very often with me,
but I guess thats how rare you are, don't you see?

I shouldn't say this since I don't really know you,
but I don't have to know you to know thats it true,

I had only a moment, to see your smile so unique,
I can't put the description in words to speak,
your smile is so rare and one of a kind,
it can even be seen by the blind,
if they rated smiles one through ten,
I would give it a 20 over and over again,

I had only a moment, when you were their in front of me,
to think of all these things, that I write to make you happy....

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  • That is like the sweetest poem ever! awww! gosh i wish my boyfriend would write me cute and sweet poems like that man!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Omg...I really miss all your poems...lol...ok...can't say it's one of your best...but well...i know you've tried...and that's good...always good to see your poems...brighten my day...

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    Excellent! 5/5, as the same for the rest of your poetry!

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Aww this is so cute:P
    pretty much what they said..you sound like an awesome guy..
    and you did a good job
    keep it up
    xoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Thank you Robert..u dont know how much this means to me..thank you..Love Always Joclyn