Where are you now

by Bradley Peter   Nov 19, 2005


I'm sitting here dying
but do you even care
your words were lying
saying you'd be there

you left me in the cold
not giving a second thought
another hand you hold
I'm disposed gift you bought

giving me a cute smile
and a cheeky little wink
you leave me to walk a mile
then gone in a blink

put my life in your grip
gave you the key to my heart
now I'm on a solo trip
i must begin at the start

'I'll be there for you forever'
to me that was your vow
then came a change in weather
and where are you now

with someone else, that's where
your ship set sail
so this heartache i must bare
because our was a fail

I'm sitting here dying
but do you even care
your words were lying
saying you'd be there

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  • 16 years ago

    by nering

    Yet again...Fantastic--! this poem i can so relate to and im like on the side u are. this was a great way to express this feeling! I tip my hat to you!! Great Job

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Yet another amazing poem written by you.. 5/5 no doubt.. take care xx:

    blaine *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Ambar K

    Your poem is really deep. Love can be the sweetest thing or the worst. Keep up the good work and keep writing and if you have time check out some of my poems

  • 18 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    I no how u feel.. gd job, u expressed yourself wel.. 5/5

    p.s please read some of my work and comment or vote..X