by Little Dot Nov 19, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
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I smile a broken smile |
by Princess09
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CUte poem has a lot of feeling in it. |
by Carrie
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Awesome poem... i can totally relate to it |
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OMG, "Without my broken smile |
by blank
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I like this poem. I thought you did a good job in calling it a 'broken smile' instead of 'fake' or 'false'. |
by N J Thornton
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This poem comes across as an anxious cry to hide behind a smile. I liked how you broke up the poem with the line "my broken smile"and then carried on to another aspect of the smile. A sad poem, keep writing. |