Calling out

Know should be now, otherwise I really like you writting style , Elise

"See" and "Me" are powerful words, use them when neccassary, keep up the good work... your poems are so emotional which is what makes them so fantastic! *hugs*

Thx for the comment, if u'd lyk sum constructive critisim, u used, see and me to much, try and be creative when thinking of verse endings. look in a dictionary or theasaurus to find similar words that sound similar, i have never done that but its a good idea. anywayz keep writing, poetry is ur interrpretation of something, an art to be used frivolously.

Thx for the comment, if u'd lyk sum constructive critisim, u used, see and me to much, try and be creative when thinking of verse endings. look in a dictionary or theasaurus to find similar words that sound similar, i have never done that but its a good idea. anywayz keep writing, poetry is ur interrpretation of something, an art to be used frivolously.