Start to Death.

by InvisibleGurl   Nov 22, 2005


I know what it feels like
To have know one there.
I know what it feels like
To know that no one cares.

I go through the same old
Hell everyday,
It's not like anything
Is ever gonna be okay.

My life is shattered,
In little pieces they fall,
And in my heart I feel,
I just want to end it all.

The sadness engulfs me,
Like a fog on the beach,
I'm slowly drifting away,
To a place they can't reach.

I swallow the pills,
It seems to numb my pain,
Nothing hurts, but I'm cold.
I can feel the rain.

I can also hear people screaming,
People tugging at my hand,
As if they could pull my soul
back to the land

Too late now,
I see a bright light,
My mind isn't struggling,
Not putting up a fight.

Everything's shutting down,
I can hear people crying,
I take one last breath,
And then begin my path to dying.

~~
All my poems are dedicated to my friends because they inspire me, and they mean the world to me. This is about how I feel sometimes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by DevilWithin

    Umm that was very good, nicely written. xox Rach

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    Wow... this is awesome! nice job and propz!!! *5/5*

    BX Girl

  • 18 years ago

    by InvisibleGurl

    Thank you for the helpful comments everyone!
    Totally appreciate the great feedback I have been getting.
    My future poems will be better :)

    Thanks again for reading and taking the time to comment.
    Laterz,
    Shirlz

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    My bad.. "I go through the same old hell,
    Every single day,
    It's not like this life,
    Will ever again be okay."

    Im pretty stupid and am so tired!! lol :D

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Hello again,
    Maybe try something like
    "I go through the same old hell,
    Every single day,
    It's not like this life,
    Will ever gonna be okay."
    Just to make it flow better :D
    Oh I loved the imaginary in this stanza
    "The sadness engulfs me,
    Like a fog on the beach,
    I'm slowly drifting away,
    To a place they can't reach." really great thinking well done!
    Again the ending wasn't what I expected, you start off the poems great but end them so sudden... maybe you should talk about the painfull death in this one a lil more?
    I dunno.. well done again! I like your work your going on my favs.

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