Self-murder

by Andrea broken tears   Nov 22, 2005


Achieving this goal
don't want to live anymore.
Cant take this pain
I have nothing to gain.
No happiness
just sweet suicide bliss.
In a pool of red
soon will be dead.
Make the slice
and end my life.
For this is my
Self-murder.

*plz comment*

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  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Really good poem, very well written 5/5,
    take care xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Short but good, I think the length really fits the poem. It would be annoying if it was drawn out and too long. I can understand it a lot. Not a good idea though, not at all. To see what I mean read my poem Suicide through two pairs of eyes. Good luck baby!

    -mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Tigger

    This poem in Deep in thought, and verry well writen.
    like to see more of your poems:)

    XxX Tigger XxX

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