I liked it, it was really good and sooo well written. Amy x

Wow beautiful. I have a friend which is suffering anorexia, I would love to let her read this (shes better now by the way) This is excellent. Very very good. Keep up the good work and take care -xxx- lotsaaaaaaa love

Well done. dis is a really well written poem n i enjoyed reading it xx

I am speechless, that poem was incredible, and...welll...just perfect. thank u so much for ur comments,they mean a lot to me,
much love,
xxemmaxxx

That was really good! I enjoyed it!

Matt....i feel so bad for you...hacving a friend tht basically tortured herself must be hard....well i love you. :-0 :-) ill ttyl..and read my new poems and COMMENT!!! k ttyl bye --Dory

;o aww, wooh im so glad part 2 is here, weeh, this is just brilliant, it made me smile how it ended "I know that you were locked up,
Not what you're meant to be,
But now the lock is broken,
Acceptance was the key.
" wow that verse touched me inside strongly ;o its amazing, this is beautiful matt, amazinggg, take care & cant wait to read more

Matt you are one in a million.
Awesome job...
i really loved the last verse...just like maya^^:P
im not sure whether it finished off good or bad though..
hmm..
hopefully talk to you soon, so i can read some more of ur inspiring words.
Don't ever change..
much love xooxox

I really like this second part as well...it was written with a whole lot of feeling..keep up the great work..

Holllyyyyy DAM!!!!!!!!!!
This is a fantastic poem, just as good as part 1, congrats, seriously i dont no how u write with such emotion yet u havnt experienced it!!!!
take care, im always here ta talk if u need :)

Again, another wonderful poem. You really have a great gift. Keep it up!

-Mikochan

Hey buddy,

Great job keep up the good work..you definitely need an appreciation..lookin forth for more.

Neo

Wonderful part II
went really well with part I and ended very nicely

I liked both parts of your poems. Keep showing your writing talents, you could end up going far. It's amazing how good you are at writing when your at the age of 12, I'm almost 15 and I don't write that good.

OMFG THATS WAS SO AWSOME! WTF U SURE UR 12 HUN? ur talented, omg omg omg i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! if u eva wanna talk, add me to msn death_by_paperclupz@hotmail.co.uk

[x]...deaths angel...[x]

O SANAPP!!!! I jus got done reading the fisrt one and then i jus read this one and i got tingles up and down my spine!!!! lol Ur a CRzAy Gud riter!!!!

Wow just as good as the first one. there is so much emotion in this, its simply astounding. keep up the good work. XXXXX
JL

I luv ur poems..ive been reading them lately...keep it up 5/5

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I loved ur poem ! It's sad but really good 5/5

Great poems. Ive read both of your anorexia poems. Everyword makes sense. I have an eating disorder. People try to tell me to eat, but most of the time it looks sickening. I hope whoever your friend is gets better and well. and I also hope you keep writing. And even if you don't look like the type of person who writes poems, and if people think its dumb. Your good at it, thats all that matters. So keep writing!

You should check out some of my poems too. They aren't even CLOSE to yours. but I guess their ok. - Ali